rate_review Reviews

I'M INFRONT OF AN AIRCON RIGHT NOW...
THIS.IS.TOO.HOT...

Man, this is not just beautifully written but so very hot too. It makes me wish that either I was Aang or my missus was more like Katara. I especially like the way you wrote On Ji nervousness and the way the others got her into it, not forgetting the way she lost herself in it.
A wonderfully arousing tale. I hope you write some more.
p.s. stupid me lost your email, just wanted to say I've started the sequel to my own story.

Yo Murph. Figured I'd finally get around to comment on this one, although I really don't know what I can say about it.

One thing I can definitely say is that I really like the length of these scenes and the level of detail you go into regarding positions and the like. I think that's a pretty hard thing to do right, and do it right you did my man. I also liked how in-character you wrote everyone, even if Meng freaked me a little by sticking with 'Aangy'. It's good to see these side-characters get involved as opposed to the constant pairings between the main characters, andthe different ways in which they were used (in bth sense of the word) were fitting to them.

I think that's about it for what I can singularly say about this piece without just going around the usual review points. I do hope you get some ideas for another fic like this sometime soon though; as you may have noticed we're currently lacking in anything stellar.

Thanks for the good read you did a good job.

Damn, this story was awesome. I love Meng and On Ji. All that was missing was the three of them going at Aang at the same time.