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for Breathless

by PureFluff

person Anon
schedule March 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
omg, the cover story cartman gives his mom is fucking genius. so canon
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think it was boring or too mushy. There were quite a few typos, but it was still a good read. You did a good job at staying in character and I liked that they were talking so much while they were fucking.