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i got to say that i love it, i read this all in one night, as for the mpreg idea i think you should go for it, it was an idea i was thinking about too, and something that came to mind when you wrote the edd worked at a bio chem lab and kept touching his belly, not everybody likes mpreg but i think it'll be fun, if you do write it please let me know, i don't come to adult fanfiction often enough to know whether or not you did write it, post on tumlr under kevedd or on ff.n if you have to, i would really love to read a continuation of this story

This was an absolute score on my part to find this.
I have throughly enjoyed reading every chapter of this and regret not posting a review for it sooner.
I hope there is a part two to this because I got hooked on reading this for a week until I finished it.
Wonderful plot, just kudos three-sixty on this. ♥ Wonderful job.

This was amazing!!! A true masterpiece! This is definitely one of the best fanfic I have ever read in my life! And this is saying a lot because I've been reading fanfic for various fandoms since about 2005. When I was younger and watched the show it crossed my mind a couple of times that they would b a cute couple, but never really shipped them. But apparently Kevedd has become pretty popular at the moment and I started scouring the web for some good Kevedd fics out of curiosity. While I found some good ones and some very good ones I was still left a bit underwhelmed. But this. THIS. I went thru so many emotions while reading this. From happy to sad, giddy, angry, hopeful, etc. it kept me riveted from beginning to end. Which is what a great fanfic SHOULD do. I read the whole thing in like 4 hours(and almost burned my dinner XD) but I couldnt stop reading. Not to mention the smut was brain meltingly HOT *_*!!! I know this story is very adult, too adult for ff.net but maybe u could post it on tumblr or something so more people could find it? This story deserves like a million reviews seriously! Thank you for writing this and making Kevedd one of my favorite pairings now! And thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of fan fiction. PLEASE!! Please, please make a sequel! I would jump at the chance to read it .And please don't stop writing, you truly have a gift :)

Oh my gods. I just.... OH MY GOOOOODS! I had to comment on this chapter in particular. But this is. Oh my gods! This is excellent! Oh, it's so fantastic. The accuracy of the dynamics in this relationship. The power play... oh my gods.

FUUUUUUUUCK!!!!!!!

AAAAAAAHHHHH! NO! Nonononono, Kevin you IDIOT! AAAAAAAHHHHH!

You must be getting so sick of me by now but. GO EDD! Yes, look at you growing as a person!

Edd, no!

that was so beautiful
bravo
all stories pale in comparison
I stayed up until 3 in the morning so I could finish it

Hello! This may be random and out of the blue, but wow. Just wow. A friend linked me to this, despite my skepticism, and I'm glad she did because that was one of the best fanfictions I've read in my life. (This is saying a lot) I read the entirety of it in the last three hours, eating it up, and you have made me laugh, made me cry, made me furious, and made me seize over the sweetness that is this pairing. I don't know how you did it, but it was wonderful and perfect and not only do I adore you, I will never watch the show again without imagining this future for the boys. As far as your male-pregnancy sequel goes, I think a lot of keyspamming is my first response and a shaky, desperate YES PLEASE after. It's up to you and maybe it's been too long, but goodness if you're still considering it I am all in favor.

Either way, you have my gratitude and salutations for writing this beautifully crafted thing.