First off; I came here for a quick rub-off. Thats typically what you do when you look up characters and some smutty word, right? I got my rocks off on two chapters...three... And was delightfully surprised as the story kept going... And going.... Hold on, a genuine story, you say?
Before I knew it two hours were gone and I was utterly enthralled in the drama and romance, I read it for enioyment instead of a turn-on. It was such a pleasant twisting and turning little piece, and the end of it- while feeling conclusive, is so preciously bubbly and sweet it leaves you begging to see more of these two.
Regarding your footnote at the end of the story; I'm not even into M-preg, but something about Double D verbally building up to the idea got me exceptionally giddy. I would LOVE to see these two handle a pregnancy, or at least a baby! I can't help it, they're beyond adorable together with how you've set it up!
Now, this was written... It seems 8 years ago. So my hopes may be permenantly dashed. All I want to say is, you wrote a wonderful, and bizarrely satisfying story of some gaymance between some nostalgic cartoon characters- and its sparked some life into my night. Encore! Bravo!
~Mikala