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November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely loved the new chapter! Although you did leave a cliffhanger lol cant wait to see more. Something i was curious about though was obviously bonnie was expecting someone (probably brick) so.... Where are they? or is that up next?
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Hope more than just the two of them get down and dirty; after all, Ron cheated too.
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looking at both chapters, I'm impressed, you did each character perfectly, keep it up
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh. This is one case where i'm more then happy the fault is mine. Loved the chapter by the way. xDDD I look forward to your next great installment.
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't like the new chapter....I LOVED IT! Looking forward to more.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seem like a good story.I would say Ron take advandage of drunk Bonnie, it seem she enjoy cheating on her boyfriend.We'll see what happen in the next chapter?
It first thought maybe you'll change it to Kim and Ron when they where planing to leave with each other.Maybe in the next chapter.?
It first thought maybe you'll change it to Kim and Ron when they where planing to leave with each other.Maybe in the next chapter.?
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice one great job with the sex scene and the blow job scene. You did the damn thing with this story I would love to see some more of this done I think the fallout of this would be very interesting. Oh yea nice job with the drunken slur most people can't hit that right on. I'm guessing there's some experience there. Also loved the forceful drunk Bonnie, just something about a forceful woman that's such a turn on.
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read mostly yuri but i loved this it was so fucking hot i'd love to seee more.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, i'm interested in more. I'm especially interested in what became of Kim while Ron was having his fun and whether or not Bonnie actually knew who he was. I do hope you post more in the future, as i found this highly interesting, sexual, and entertaining.
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh you defintely have to continue this. the reactions of Kim, and how Bonnie will react to screwing the 'Loser', and then realizing that he was the best she ever had.