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come on please continue the story i really want to know what happens next

I really like this story so far. Keep it up!

This is a very good story so far. A few grammatical mistakes here and there, but over all this is great! Please update soon.

Hmm...well, I like the idea of Vlad not only not being a bad guy, but stepping up to the plate as much as possible, doing everything within his power to take care of Jazz and Danny after the fact. If Jack and Maddie had written anything to leave the children in his power should something happen then it makes sense that he got their custody, but if there wasn't anything and he actually had to fight other close relatives......although it's also possible that there weren't any "close" relatives and enough money does seem to speak wonders so I suppose there's no saying it couldn't happen.

Other than that, I can see Vlad initially getting angry...but blowing up on Danny for touching his own mom's lab coat? I mean...Vlad loved her too but...Danny just lost his /mom/...eh, I guess people aren't always rational when it comes to the matters of the heart though. :P And, of course, we have the promising seeds of jealousy coming from Danny, what could this mean? :O And how long will it take for Vlad to notice something's up....hm, hm, hm... Well, I suppose I'll just have to wait and find out. :) I look forward to progression; until then...

Happy Holidays,
~Dagger