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for A Birthday Wish

by eoraptor

person skoshi4
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DarkDannyPhantom did a picture of Zita and Felix in this situation. I think that it's in WWOEC.
person skoshi4
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, Eoraptor! Anxious for the next installment.
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey been a while since I've been to the site, but your story caught my attention and it is awsome. Not a huge fan of the young girl stuff, but I like how you did it anime style, making the young girl the aggressor. Also glad you did go the route of making an actual and believable fallout to things as well. Don't get me wrong I like the whole random sex thing from time to time, but I like the story aspect you have going here. Also the fact that you don't have Ron completely on the wayside when people talk about him. I'm a Ron fan like to see him be the player every once in a while (reluctant is better than d-bag). Just saying glad that Ron wasn't forgotten as Kim went on some lesbian escapade or seen as asshole by everyone and treated like crap, or offed himself. Anywho sorry bout the rant there, but awsome, AWSOME, story and I hope you can find time to update soon.
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I've had fun reading it.
person Jawelik
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I have a thing for eager and aggressive girls, so I quite enjoyed the scene in the first chapter. You also took the story after that exactly where I hoped it would go, with Kim finding out, and Ron dealing with the aftermath. I'm enjoying it much and look forward to your next update.

-Jawelik
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An actual story? Here? Who would've thunk it?

Obviously, I'm surprised. Make that pleasantly surprised. I'm really excited to see where you go with all of this. Great work.