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for Entering the Parlour

by Candlejack

schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Clap clap ^_^

Sweet, but with Zim still being Zim.

Liked the computer saying "ew"
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous. I loved the probe into Zim's species, and how thier make-up affects him.

"Irken were a hive-minded species, lots of them working together in close quarters towards a common goal. They lived, worked and breathed next to each other, constantly coming into close contact with one another. It was a constant background noise, one’s pod-mates surrounding them. ... Isolation did bad things to Irkens. It effected him, making him jittery, effected his work, his thoughts twisting off in different directions."

What a wonderful way to explain the crazy! That's just what fanfic writers are supposed to do. Look into what's already there, and find the potential awesome that the original writer's didn't.