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great fanfic can't wait for the next capter

Man i got an account just to tell you continue this story, i really like. I know its been dead awhile now but its never late then never yeah? Heres hoping you please continue, i'll review every new capture if you want.

I have a question: was Kim naked the entire time that Shego's mother was there?

I'm really, really enjoying this story. You've done a great job based on a completely original idea. But that's not the main reason I'm writing this. The main reason is this: in the first chapter, it says that the statue was from South America. In that case, it can't be a leopard. It has to be a jaguar. I don't blame you for making that mistake. A lot of people do. Other than that, as well as the consistent mistakes in grammar, which I can only assume are because English is your second language or something, I don't think there's really anything wrong with your story.

You've got a pretty good story here. Structurally, it needs a little work, but the plot is great. Your descriptions of the scenes are done beautifully.

I hope you will continue to post more chapters. I especially want to see Shego gets some "payback" on Kim.

What would be really hysterical is if Ron (who doesn't know what's been going on with Kim) came for a surprise visit. He would certainly be in for a surprise.

Great stuff. Keep up the good work.

Hello,chubi6328, I love this story. It is, sexy, funny, and quite entertaining. However I think it could be much better. I suggest you get a Beta reader to help out with spelling and description. I would be happy to help if you are interested in continuing this. Email me at neko-otome@ficfan.org if you are interested or leave me a message here.

Wow a great story i thought i loved the show on disney but this finally makes use of the tension between kimme and ms.Go so thanks and i wish you luck in the next chapter's i hope i get as good as you in my writing i still need to work on that whole making sex scenes sound not dirty thing.. but thanks for the good read i read all 8 chapters before reviewing so i could thank u fully

MUAHAHAHA! I love it! It's so hard finding good (And I mean really good) stories on this site for my limited interests. Keep up the good work. One thing though. What's with all the "¡§", "¡" and "¡|"??? My only gipe with this story.

Pretty hot chapters. Kim's got some nice `equipment' there. Heh.
SailorNemesis

Cute, fun story. Waiting for chap 5...
SailorNemesis