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by pbow320

person lb54
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if your taking a break or not...

not trying to wear you out, just wondering if you got writers block

I mean my story cranked out like 7 chapters and I stopped too...so I figured I'd ask if your still writing anything in your spare time...if you have any
person lb54
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
its okay about the whoa =P

good story anyway! I just hope we see more foreplay with Danny and sam

for some reason foreplay gets me more turned on then the actual sex...specially with Sam!

great story *Thumb up*
person Hana2
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very creative story.
person P3244
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!
person lb54
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot! 2 more chapters already? Can't wait for the rest. And Danny and Jazz? SWEET!Sam and Jazz was hot enough! lol

Keep up the marvelous work!
person lb54
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh and dude, Sam is awesome, love how you got her in this XD

I can't wait to see where "erogenous zones" bits play out. sound like fun!
person lb54
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can't wait for the other chapters!

Love Maddie's attitude in this one xD

The Wham, Bam, thank you ma'am line was priceless!