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by pbow320

schedule June 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

great story, very funny, it is no wonder why you are my favorite author. i love the old tv show referances  

schedule July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Probably a dumb question seeing as this story has been here for ages. But will there be any updates? I rather like where this was going and it just sort of ends with no real finale.
person magic713
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Gr8 job. Absolutely love it.
person Scorpia
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story. Especially the part of Sam turning ghost for her love.
person Anonymous
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I sorta feel bad for Jack though. Would it hurt to give Jack at least one positive point in the sex catgory? Other than that, great job.
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is realy a graet and wounderful read. I can't wait for the next prat to come out soon! I hope?
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story i was drawn into and couldn't stop reading i read it all in like 2 hours i was hooked i can't wait to read sum or your other works and..just. wow keep up the great work
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's just a wounderful read. I can't wait for the next chap's.
person lb54
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude! awesome!

just one thing...can there be more foreplay? for me? lol

great story though!
person lb54
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot again! 4 more chapters! XD

sweet!