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September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly hot. And I was exceptionally pleased to see the boys willing to play with each other. That's something that I can never find enough of in orgy fics. Thank you so much for writing this.
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*faints*
That was amazing!
I'd love to watch Zuko and Mai "play" with Aang. ;)
That was amazing!
I'd love to watch Zuko and Mai "play" with Aang. ;)
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know it's rude to send a message via the reviews page but I'm new to this site and know no other way to contact you. Besides, you can freely erase this once you have read it.
I took your advice and edited my story 'Honey I Shrunk the Avatar' and I would value your opinion on how it appears now. I paid special care to the paragraph layout (double spacing and so forth) and fixed up my grammar.
As to one of your other 'Cons', I don't really want to change Suki's reaction to Sokka supposed betrayal. I went out with a red head for 5 years and I can tell you the rumors are true, they do have fiery tempers.
And yes, there will be a sequal to this one called 'Beauty and the Beast' mainly featuring Azula in her new role as the 'Blood Goddess' and an OC, the AntiAvatar. It's still very much a work in progress but I should start posting the first chapters for it soon.
See ya
Morgman
I took your advice and edited my story 'Honey I Shrunk the Avatar' and I would value your opinion on how it appears now. I paid special care to the paragraph layout (double spacing and so forth) and fixed up my grammar.
As to one of your other 'Cons', I don't really want to change Suki's reaction to Sokka supposed betrayal. I went out with a red head for 5 years and I can tell you the rumors are true, they do have fiery tempers.
And yes, there will be a sequal to this one called 'Beauty and the Beast' mainly featuring Azula in her new role as the 'Blood Goddess' and an OC, the AntiAvatar. It's still very much a work in progress but I should start posting the first chapters for it soon.
See ya
Morgman
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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I felt one good review deserves another but I only hope I can give a review as concise and intelligent as the one you gave my 'Honey' story.
Spelling, grammar and paragraph layout were perfect. This story had a professionally written feel to it which is what makes it so good to read.
The story itself was incredible. I'm a big fan of the original pairings (Zuko/Mai, Katara/Aang) and reading of their little foursome was quite the turn on. I liked how the boys had a little Bi action along with the girls and I especially liked miss 'Insatiable' Katara. And Aang getting 'Carnal' advise from the other Avatars was brilliant, sometimes I wish I had his little water chakra blocking technique.
All in all, beautifully done and I'm looking forward to reading your other story.
Spelling, grammar and paragraph layout were perfect. This story had a professionally written feel to it which is what makes it so good to read.
The story itself was incredible. I'm a big fan of the original pairings (Zuko/Mai, Katara/Aang) and reading of their little foursome was quite the turn on. I liked how the boys had a little Bi action along with the girls and I especially liked miss 'Insatiable' Katara. And Aang getting 'Carnal' advise from the other Avatars was brilliant, sometimes I wish I had his little water chakra blocking technique.
All in all, beautifully done and I'm looking forward to reading your other story.
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fuck yes about time you posted this here.
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is very hot so far. Oddly enough, I've never read a moresome fic with these four, but I am getting very much into it!