rate_review Reviews

yay! seems very organic in the progression of the story. follows thru the insinuations of the cartoon without being creepy, and much as i loved the movie, he was pretty lewd and pedo...

great story thank you

Sad chapter. Im sure BJ would have done her...good work!

I really love your story. I wish you would continue it. Between your story and the other one that has the same kind of premise... yours is WAY better, and you have written the characters correctly.:)

I look forward to future chapters!

Nice story. Glad to see they got together. But please tell me there is more. there is more right? PLEASE LET THERE BE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....and people suck when they don't review.

Don't let lack of reviews slow you down! You have an interesting story going on here, and I would like to see where it goes. I know a lot of people won't review, but that doesn't mean they don't like the story. Some people just don't have accounts on this website. Try Fanfiction dot net. You will get more responses from them that way. Otherwise, please don't just stop; it is such a waste.

Vlade

Great Job! Love the story please write more! Love the moody beetlejuice.