rate_review Reviews

This story was a lot of fun I really did enjoy it quite a bit including the funta scene thanks entirely to the fact that you didn't add testicles to a girl for crying out loud thank you!!!
There's something seriously wrong when people don't realize putting testicles on any creature makes it a boy especially if it doesn't have a cunny.

Ignoring the spelling errors and the absolutely atrocious grammar I will say that this is the best jade story I've read so far. I found it to be original and quite whimsical so good job and thanks for a fun story.

Your fellow writer Aysha.

Good god!!! I have read an excellent lesbian futanari fic!!! Impossibru!!!!! You are an ecllebt writer, forget the spelling 2+2=4 is simple so reading your story and fixing t is just as simple I really hope to see something like this soon maybe a follow up, I would recommend a group of short stories to explain jade's and her clone intimate relationship see how it develops how they fool Jackie and her uncle maybe right at the point where they are about to be discover you start with them finding more artifacts and not have that much time to look into there relationship deeper. Chow Bennet out

Lovely writing. I totally feel for Jade. I'm just wondering if you're planning to continue, because I want to know what the clone found and if she is going to suffer this other personality thing, or if she is already suffering it. In any case, Jade is going to be in deep unless she finds a way to hide the clone from Jackie.

Keep writing please. I wish to see more.

Awesome stuff. Keep at it best you can!

Very slick. I'd certainly like to see the continuation of this.

Amazing fic you got, Im enjoying Jade's curious actitude so far. Im sure you can get this far, far away. And now for the 3rd chapter events, why dont you throw uncle Jackie into the mix? Im sure the three of them can have some fun :D

From Venezuela
D4rK

Damn! You update fast, I like that. Anyway I loved the action between the clones, you described each feelings well even if they are the same person. The lemon was really hot, and I expect you to throw Jackie in there. I hope you do that. 'til next update then.

From Venezuela
D4rK

Loving this story thus far..... a little disappointed that it is so far only Jade/Jade Clone, but it's a very good story nonetheless..... Really excited wondering what Jackie's reaction after the whole "BWAA!" thing wears off, now that he has TWO nieces.