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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why haven't you added more chapters? What happens to max? It's so good I would read it if it had a hundred chapters! PLEASE UPDATE!
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please, continue the story! I really, REALLY want to see how Ben and Gwen handle this development, and how Grandpa Max ends up finding out.
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is a great begin to what I think will be a great story line I can't wait to read the rest of this so please post the next chapter soon. P.S. this would be the second time I ever have wrote a review and any store on any website.
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME, i hope you do make another chapter cause i would like to see what would happen next. (^_^)
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that story just BLEW my mind. I kinda wonder if Raven would give Gwen lesion in the sexy magic?