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Ok, you want reviews so I will give you one. It is a fact of life that you will get many more hits then reviews. You will have to decide if you want to write badly enough to put up with that. In the same way that most authors never get published, most people who read fanfics don't bother to review them.
While your writing is decent, I come to ADULT fanfic sites to read stories with sex. If I wanted fanfics without sex, there are alot more places to accomodate me. So when you have no sex in your first two chapters it discourages me. When you state you are a long way from sex it makes me want to quit your story. There is not much incentive for me to continue reading a very stock plot-line with no real action just because you claim to be building up to something. Your story needs to sell itself fast. Especially on an adult site. I want some sex at the latest by chap 2, or else you need to have such a cool story going on that I do not care if I have to wait. Unfrotunately you are not managing either.
SailorNemesis

Interesting twist to this story. Things are not going as planned for Azula, especially since she cracked her own brother's head wide open. Something tells me Mai won't be happy with that. It'll be interesting to see how this goes as they search for a healer, and what Zuko's reaction will be once he comes to. As for reviews, don't sweat yourself over them. I think this site has been going through a dry spell. Hell, I haven't gotten as many reviews as I wanted for my Avatar story. Hope this doesn't persuade you to stop your writing, though. You got real potential gold going here and you should continue with it.

Great story so far, please keep it going.

hi keep up the good work got a nice feel to it. sorry i didnt review last time

Interesting, but short. Hope you post a few more chapters.

BTW, you misspelled Throne in your title.

An interesting start-up, I know its bad but yhe Azula/Zuko pairing is just so intreaging. I look forward to the next part.