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August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I SOOOO cannot believe that! Way to go!
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December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Snow Day" is clear and easy to read. You also wrote it in a way that I think accurately approximates Sokka's thought processes and manner of speaking.
The sex is tremendous. This is the only fan fiction I've ever read that taught me legitimate sexual techniques.
"Snow Day" is probably the best sex-based fan fiction I've ever seen. It might be the best written fan work I've read overall.
The sex is tremendous. This is the only fan fiction I've ever read that taught me legitimate sexual techniques.
"Snow Day" is probably the best sex-based fan fiction I've ever seen. It might be the best written fan work I've read overall.
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May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Standing ovation man. Very nice chp and i would love to see where this goes.
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good story. im a curious how many people are gonna get the legend of zelda cartoon refrance. (god what a bad show) but good story
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May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha! That was great! Very hot smut! I'm sad it's over though...*sniff*
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good! The only error I could find is that a greave goes on the leg (you probably meant a bracer). But overall, a well-written and somewhat believable story. Can't wait for the next one!
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love it when Azula is bossy! It makes for a great lemon and this was a great lemon.
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
I've seen very few Erotic Fics with Azula involved (in fact, I'm working on one), but this is easily one of the best I've read. Very hot and epic when they went into full-blown humping, and you kept them both in character. It's rare to see that.
I hope you do decide to write a 'Round 2' for this fic. It definitely deserves a continuation. If not though, still a damn good Fic.
I've seen very few Erotic Fics with Azula involved (in fact, I'm working on one), but this is easily one of the best I've read. Very hot and epic when they went into full-blown humping, and you kept them both in character. It's rare to see that.
I hope you do decide to write a 'Round 2' for this fic. It definitely deserves a continuation. If not though, still a damn good Fic.
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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it's great. sequel?
i wonder what Katara & Zuko would think if they found them?
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very well done with a great writing style. Clearly, you know what you're doing. Plus, your Sokka is great! Totally in character!! I'm sure all the Sokkala fans everywhere are rejoicing. Keep up the great work.
-B-Ice
-B-Ice