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Holy shit, I think I love you (platonically, of course).

Really, I have nothing to nitpick at, nothing to complain about. It was perfect.

Everything was interesting and I think that was a good point to stop the chapter.

I like how Danny is slowly crumbling, and the hints that Dark is not as happy with his sociopathy/life as he tries to get everyone to believe. And Dash and Jazz knowing and not being able to stop it. (I eagerly await the epic confrontation with between Jazz and Danny, and possibly Vlad later on.)

I love it!!! The Dan/Danny/Vlad triangle it's a work of art!!!! And it's also my faveorite pairing. I can't wait to see Vlad's reaction when he finds out about what's been happening to Danny, knowing how possessive he is he's going to blow a blood vessle. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh dear, definitely some none-too-secretive foreshadowing there in the last chappie. I have to assume Danny will somehow end up getting himself invited to this party, yes? And with Dark there hm-hmm...well, safe to say he probably won't have a jolly good time.

As for the rest of it...poor Danny. I know it's gotta be an awful thing to try to talk about or explain, but I'm surprised he hasn't broken down yet and let somebody know what he's going through. I like that Jazz and Sam and Tucker at least aren't totally oblivios, but one of them needs to get tactful and pull him aside and talk to him in a way that actually gets him to open up instead of curl in on himself. At this point he obviously desperately needs at least one character to find solace in, a shoulder to cry on...or if nothing else, at least an outlet so it doesn't all build up inside and drive him crazy - like it is.

Well, anyway, since you seem to be the only other author active in this section and you're writing slash...I figured I'd check it out. I'll keep an eye open for updates. :)

~Dagger

D: Poor Danny. I really do wonder where all this is going.

me like me want more

...wow! this is pretty good!
please update soon ^^

Heh, I just noticed I reviewed this story twice before this. Whoops. I am so so so glad that you updated, it doesn't matter how long it took.

Poor, traumatized Danny. ;_;

It won't take Jazz long to connect the dots. The thing is, I don't think she'll be able to help too much. Sam and Tucker are going to freak out when they find out.

Ohhh Dark's evil plans are deliciously evil, and we haven't found out what they are yet! I'm curious to see what is making Danny's powers short-circuit. Is it really a device with future technology? And why hasn't Clockwork been able to do anything about this?

So, I guess Danny is going to suffer through much worse before things get better, right? That is, if they ever get better at all.

You're going to update this, right? I want to know just what Dark has planned, and what was the video tape for? (I mean, was it just for reviewing the event, or blackmail, or what?) I'm loving the story so far! There aren't enough well written fics of this pairing. And Danny is going to break down soooo epically. I want to see all the psychological repercusions this will have in his every day life. That's the interesting part of fanfics, how are the characters affected? What parts of their lives are changed by the events that they're thrown in? How do they act with each other?

This is an excellent work, and it's just one chapter!

You're going to deal with the psychological aftermath? Sweet.

There were a few spelling errors, but nothing that distracted from the story.

An underwritten pairing. I hope to see more of this!