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WTF?????? okay im confused uh this completely went over my head ???? why kill himself and if he couldn't live without Dark why uggh i don't get it its so hard to put this in words ....This story had a ?Twisted ending

This is a very griping story. I actually went on a bender and read all of the chapters in one sitting. Its such a tragic story and yet it still beautiful. The detail you gave all throughout the story is easy to read and imagine the actions in the words. I could go on about all the greatness of this story, but I'll sum it up here: You're an awsome author and I absolutly love this story!

*sniffles* Don't give me that look! *sniff* I got something in my eye, okay?! *wails*

THIS REVIEW IS SPOILERIFIC FOR THOSE OF YOU READING THE REVIEWS BEFORE DECIDING IF YOU WANT TO READ THE STORY OR NOT (like I often do).

(By the way, if you have trouble deciding: Read it so long as you're not weak of heart, stomach or mind. This story will rape your mind and leave you begging for MORE.)


.....DO NOT READ THIS REVIEW BEFORE FINISHING THE STORY AS IT GIVES AWAY THE ENDING AND IT WILL PROBABLY RUIN THE EXPERIENCE FOR YOU.....



I REPEAT: DO NOT READ THIS REVIEW BEFORE FINISHING THE STORY. IT GIVES AWAY THE ENDING AND IT WILL PROBABLY RUIN THE EXPERIENCE FOR YOU.



NO, REALLY, I MEAN IT. :O



YOU'RE WELCOME FOR THE WARNING. :D


Martel approves very much of tender love-making, even when it leads to murder-suicide. XD

(Er... sorry the warning was huger than the review itself. I've just been spoiled waaaay too many times in the past. XD)

(Re-captcha: "his detest" OMFG IT'S SENTIENT.)

Love the new chapter!!!! Something tells me that Vlad will be back though, after all he is part ghost so either living or a ghost I have a feeling he'll be back!!!!!!!!

I saw that you updated on Fanfiction.net, so when are you gonna update here?

PLEASE TELL ME YOU'RE GOING TO UPDATE SOON!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! I LOOK FORWARD TO THE UPDATE HERE OR ON Fanfiction.net!!!!!

Finally Danny is coming clean it's about fucken time!!!! I just can't wait too see Vlad's reaction when Danny tell's hime what's been happening, cause nothing's hotter than a possessive Vlad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think that Jazz should talk to Vlad about all of this than he can get the truth out of HIS BADGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mm, nice development going on here. I like that Vlad is picking up on things - as one of your other reviewers pointed out, definite potential for some extreme protective/possessiveness in later chapters, namely after he finds out (as I'm sure he will). It's also refreshing to see that Sam and Tucker (or especially Tucker at least) aren't completely dumb to the fact that Danny's capable of keeping secrets; it seems too often that the friends/family are just totally out of the loop to a ridiculous extent. Couldn't help but be a little pissed at Dash for hearing something obviously bad happening but then just scampering off with his tail between his legs, but sadly enough, it seemed very in character (or at least an easily believable reaction).

What will Jazz do to let Danny know she knows now? (Or knows to some extent, in any case.) When will Vlad find out and what will he do when he does? How will Danny react to becoming slowly more "used to" this awful treatment? And what is Clockwork's grand plan? Hm, hm, hmm...something tells me this is all a master plot to shove Vlad and Danny together early on before he messes it up later in life (or just never goes for it). I have to wonder if there couldn't have been a way to get them together that didn't involve allowing him to be repeatedly raped by his older persona...but then there wouldn't be this story then, would there?

'Til next time,
~Dagger