rate_review Reviews

Very well written. I particularly enjoyed how toph fumbled around in her first attmepts. Please continue. Perhaps some bending? I'm a true fan of using the bender's abilities in unique ways. Check out Katara's demonstration in my story: A Bender's Best Friend. Again great read!

I've said it several times already, but you've done such a great job I had to say it again: great job! You've made both characters so hot, not to mention their interactions. And I like the approach you did which completely ignores the whole dominant/submissive thing in favor of something I haven't seen too often in fics involving Toph.

he he I just love Toph.

I like this unusal pairing and I like where you're going with it. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

Oh hot damn I really want to see what happens next.