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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now this is an AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! story, i honestly was crying in that last chapter, granted it is mostly cause it makes me think about my current sitch with my gf who has brain cancer but also because of how well you have been writing this story, i look omni omega uber ultra hyper uber forward to the next chapters.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating story. I can see why you've gotten 7400 hits in three months.
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. And it's awesome that you update often.
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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well now that IS a different take on the subject. I hope you can keep it up. Now I wonder how Ron is going to heal himself awaken and rescue Yori. Sounds like fun.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I assume that that lie was before and now Ron was owning up to it. So let's put it back and gear and see where this trail leads.
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well now that's an interesting take so far. So in other words keep it up and let's see where you go with it.
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now that's a little different. Loved this part of the story. So little Hanna is a monkey time traveller. Not a bad take on it.
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was more fun than anything. I wonder how Ron keeps getting lucky with having Barkin around. I read the other chapters earlier. I was confused for a moment and I remembered a Mrs. Stoppable mask that KP had on. Now the question why is it starting to restrict her breathing. Ron needs to totally get Kim out of that mask and into the motel room.
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good job. The "pillow talk" is spot on. Can't wait to read more.
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great story writing. Us writers are so under appreciated, thanks for posting. :)
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