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for The Monkey's Tail

by Levi2000a

person Muzzlehatch
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hadn't known that you'd finished this, have been concentrating on your works on FF. Good job!
person GhostwriterMO
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello, first time writer, long time reader and I can honestly say that you are doing a wonderful job on this story. I'm not a fan of rape, but the necessity of it in your story just makes me root for Ron to put this rabid beast down. I'm looking forward to the future chapter of this story and I'm hoping for more excitement to come as well. And thank you for adding Commander Argus to the story, you brought a few tears to my eyes seeing him back, you know what I mean. Thank you and keep up the great writing.
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story, and i am very glad to see Monkeyfist/YtD finally begins to get what is owed them so i am looking forward to the next chapter
person study_of_chaos
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Great work.
person Sentinel
schedule July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So Yori is brought out of it and Anne is trying to keep Yono and Monkey Fist occupied. Good good, can't wait to see where you tak this now.

ST
person Sentinel
schedule July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, Ronnie forgot something. Nothin like a fly in the ointment. So about another 500 miles of bad road.

ST
schedule June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow i am really wanting to take Monkey Fist's head and shove it so far up his ass that he is seeing the back of his head coming back out his mouth, i am looking forward to the next chapter
person skoshi4
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that you're keeping this story up. Sorry to hear about your job sitch though. Hope that you get another soon.
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This like always is an AWESOME story, very well written and it really affects ones' emotions, it's been a long time since i have read and reviewed and i just got done getting caught up and i am very eager to read what happens next.
person skoshi4
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I grew up in the 50's in Hawaii and remember the fear that we had concerning a nuclear attack. Barkin makes it sound like it was just a joke but I can tell you that it was very real. The Cuban missile crisis of 1962 had us feeling that the end of the world was upon us. In '59 a guy came to a PTA meeting and tried to sell shares in a community bomb shelter, but there were no takers because most people worked in the city and it would have taken hours to get to the shelter, unless it was a night attack, when everybody was home.