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February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please :)
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story very much. This is the first Ozai/Ursa story I have ever come across. Update soon!
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this and I hope you do MORE!!! Stone2Fire
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Avatar is also one of my favorite worlds for fanfic, too. I may move mine here because of its rare mature content.
I had to comment on yours, the first fic I am commenting on here.
Excellent! You have captured their personalities so well. You have well researched their clothing and traditions. Their passions and acts very realistically portrayed. And yet you keep the grace of wording that never crosses the line of crass or crude. Well done!
I had to comment on yours, the first fic I am commenting on here.
Excellent! You have captured their personalities so well. You have well researched their clothing and traditions. Their passions and acts very realistically portrayed. And yet you keep the grace of wording that never crosses the line of crass or crude. Well done!
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ursa letting her inner fire burn out of control is freaking HAWT! Ohhh I like the edge of violence and that he's trying to control her but playing the head game of using her body as a weapon. Lovely job with keeping the charaters so interesting. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the tension you have created between these two. This has peaked my interest and I would very much love to have more of it. OrangePeelings~
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Welcome, I will be looing for more.