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for Fun at the Pool.

by WrotedForYou

schedule January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i gotta admit this is probably one of the better stories out there. Very enjoyable, very familiar in a way. I don't know if it was the way the characters matched their personalities from the show to a tee (which is easy to botch by some) or the scenes that give an almost nostalgic sensation. The only thing that i didn't like was the epilogue. it seemed a little out of character for Arthur's parents to be so passive. Mostly i guess its because i really hate to see such a good piece end.
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was very good. Your great a describing how people are feeling. I hope you write more.
person master30
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter 1 it was great.
person master30
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter 2 it was great.
person master30
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter 3 it was great.
person master30
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter 4 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.