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for In the Mist of Gorilla Fist

by battleaxe

person flyer23
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another good Ron and Yori story.
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another good one especially loved the oral scene. A whole lot of good detail work there very easy to picture and put myself in Ron's position. You have a real knack for getting the whole feeling and vibe for you scenes it makes your stories great. If you got any more to the story I can't wait to read it.
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My my my you do certainly have a way with words my friend. Very hot little love scene you put down there I must admit I enjoyed it immensely. Very descriptive and very hentai loved the detail and feeling involved great job. Looking forward to upcoming chapters if there are any.
person Jayrich
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope you have plans to continue this story soon. I like where it's going so far...
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man really messed up spot to end the story in really messed up! Got some good stuff goin though so I'm a little curious as to how your going to proceed with this one. Really can't wait fot the next chapter.
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. A couple of pointers the beginning is a little too long for setting the story. The ending is rather abrupt(it looks like the story was cut off).