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person flyer23
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a fan of guy on guy.But if I focuse on the other parts of the story, it's not bad.

Not too much into sexual scenes.But still interesting to read.Thy Gwen and Heather together was pretty cool.And nice coupling, like Cody/Beth and Gwen/Trent.They are my fav pairing.But I most admit the Heather and DJ pair was nice.She seem nicer around him in your story.It was a surprise and enjoyable.Like Heather busting Chris and Chef.

But the funnies part was Noah yelling he love Cody.When he finds out about Beth and Cody.And when Cody told Gwen basicily it's over his move on.