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I actually didn't think I would like it as much as I did
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I like it. You have a great sense of description and the kind of language that makes a story erotic in the first place. Which is more than what can be said for many adult fanfiction authors. Though I kind of had a problem with this one because it's hard to imagine Sparky Sparky Boom Man as a sexual being, and you seemed to characterize him as something resembling a stereotypical porn manga villain. But I understand that there's probably no other way to make him hot otherwise, I know I can't think of one. I've really loved your other stories though.

But, I gotta be honest with you. I was looking forward to your next story and when you finally posted I was rather disappointed that it featured Katara again. Okay, so maybe she's your favorite character and you find her hot, ain't nothing wrong with that. But you're an erotic author, and you've got a lot of talent. It would really be great if you expanded your repertoire and worked on some of the other female characters. What about Toph? Or Suki? And the FN girls are practically begging to be put in porn fanfic.

Chocolate may be delicious, but eat too much of it and you'll still get sick.

Anon, come back and flame me all you want, I WILL delete every single review you leave. You apparently don't know the meaning of concrit.

A very nice fic if you take request's i would like to request a Mai/Katara one-shot set after season 3.

How nice of you to come here and flame me, Anon. If you don't like a story, don't read it. It's as simple as that, retard.

Hot damn, I think this is the first time I've ever seen CM get any action!!!

I freaking love this! What a great pairing. You're doing an amazing job and this is really quite hot.

I remember this one. ;)

Oh. My. God. This is fucking hot. I never entertained the thought of Combustion Man being sexual...but I'm rather enjoying the concept.