rate_review Reviews

I so want a sequel to this. Great job.

Another masterpiece! I always pictured Combustion Man being quite...large. ;)

Really interesting, one of your better works for sure.

Well, Aloof...Androgynous you've done it again. You are definetly the Empress of Crack. You hold dominion over all things crack related. Good thing too because I always know that I can get my fix from you. lol I never thought of seeing Combustion Man in a pairing. It works soo well. How can a burly 7'2" pyrokinetic assassin not be awesome. This stroy was great. I loved your interpretation of him, he seemed very much how I would imagine him, silence included. I also like Kataras spirit and spunk. I think u have a very special way of bringing out the characters and who they are. Your writing captures and holds the reader. So descriptive and it flows wonderfully. One of my fave parts was at the end how Katara behaves once help arrives. I've read every story you've posted here (except for 1-2 of the yaoi/yuri ones) and I love them all. You make my day with your updates, I always feel so excited upon seeing ur name under a title. Have you thought of a bit of Xin Fu action? Maybe Xin and Katara or Toph... or even Xin/Katara/Toph O.O wowzers lol. Haru doesnt get used very often. Heck I wouldnt even mind to see the Cabbage Man, I konw you could make it good hehe. You could write about a rock copulating with a leaf and I'm sure it would be superb lol. Sorry if any of my 'review' seems over the top. I've read you since like 05 or before and have never reviewed u_u . I guess its repressed praise spewing forth. Unfortunately I'm not a critic so my 'review' can't be more thorough focusing on more literary aspects of your writing. But I can say that I feel all the components that make up your story make it excellent, you nail it completly. I love your writings. Anyway I've very excited for the sequel to this piece (hint, hint...nudge, nudge... come on man XD). I'd love it if this was continued ;). Maybe we can hear Combustion Man actually speak next time :D. I'm sure I left out most of what I originally wanted to say (probably why I dont review more, my words always escape me). I'm gonna go and re-read Hunter's Delights. Thanks for the stimulating story.

Wow unusual pairing..but oddly it works...are you going to continue the tale with him following the team to the air temple? Great work as always

I really hope for more!!
awesome work!

Oh... yes. I just came. (smokes a cigarette)

*fans self* that was freaking great! I loved this two shot, so very nice.

YUUUUUUUUUUS About tiiiiime

Damn but this is so freaking hot, I love rereading this. I love how you make the 'conversation' flow between them and discriptions of how big and muscley his is great. I'm picturing him bouncing her in his lap, but I'm eager to see where you are going with this. I love her thoughts on how Sokka never gets kidnapped, very funny.