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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's how it ends. Senseless violence followed by easy sex.
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, haven't read anything like this before. I'm not familiar with Miller's works, except "300". Kimmie makes Mike Hammer look like a sissy boy.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was... frightening. and awesome.
not a crossover that I ever would have considered, but you've done well with it, I think.
I'll definitely be looking for more.
not a crossover that I ever would have considered, but you've done well with it, I think.
I'll definitely be looking for more.
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say an awsome story very gritty. Nice way to end things too if it is the end. Whole lot of good stuff goin on there also great job with the action in this one. I wholy enjoyed it.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"I'm the goddamn Kim Possible"
Not exactly how I was expecting that line, but still just as badass as expected.
I am curious on how Ron lost his sight, but I do like the whole 'seeing eye molerat'. good stuff, hope to see more!
Not exactly how I was expecting that line, but still just as badass as expected.
I am curious on how Ron lost his sight, but I do like the whole 'seeing eye molerat'. good stuff, hope to see more!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, i tried to keep it vague but I do provide some backstory for the blindness.
That and the closing line was just to burrow one last stretch of Frank Miller-ism, over the top cool and the abomination he created in Allstar Batman and Robin
That and the closing line was just to burrow one last stretch of Frank Miller-ism, over the top cool and the abomination he created in Allstar Batman and Robin
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahh didn't catch the explination on Ron's blindness first time through. Two reviews on one chapter but I'm making up for chap 2. Also want to say Drakken is nice and disturbing. good work, keep it up!
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. You definately captured the spirit of Frank's writings with this. Though I am curious on how you're going to 'Millerize' Ron, Rufus, Drakken, Shego, and the others.
keep it up and continue this!
keep it up and continue this!
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Also, just a side thought that came to me after I already reviewed this ...
Ron: Do you know who I am!? I'm the Goddamn Monkey Master!!
ok, back to patiently awaiting update
Ron: Do you know who I am!? I'm the Goddamn Monkey Master!!
ok, back to patiently awaiting update