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for Don't Forget What To Call Her

by Gunwild

person Xagzan
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was quite hot. I never thought I'd like Sokka/Azula as a pairing but I'm more cool with it than I'd expected. You did a great job here with keeping Azula in character, while also adding that little sweet twist at the end. I got worried for a second there that it was all a dream she was having back in the joint, but was glad to discover otherwise. Too bad you haven't written more Avatar stuff in a couple of years.

Oh, and I agree fully with the story summary :p I wouldn't say I'm into the whole bdsm scene, but reading Azula's dialogue here in Grey Delisle's sex-dripping voice? Chills
person MastaRevan
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MAN! THIS WAS MORE THAN HOT! This should have 1000 reviews! ha
person anon
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the twist at the end. Very nice!
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I FREAKING LOVE THIS! Why are there not more reviews for this!?! I adore Sokka being at Azula's mercy as much as I like seeing their siblings do the same thing. The dialog was fantastic and I loved the whole Princess and tasting thing. That was hot and wonderfuly in character and I just adored how you did this.

I would be very happy to see you do more Sokka stories. It would be great to see him with the other Fire Nation ladies, and you don't have to give it a happy ending.
person Bluetiger
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Given that this is a noncon/dubcon, it is disturbingly hot, of course the fact that Sokkla is one of my favourite pairings in ATLA, crack or otherwise, probably has something to do with that. :)

The way that Azula is in complete control, and quickly has a helpless Sokka acquiescing to her demands, seems like a very likely scenario for their first encounter. I'll admit to being a little surprised, though not as much as poor Sokka, when she gives him the finger, lol, but I guess it produced the response that she was looking for. However I found the mechanics of Azula's movements a little difficult to visualise at this point, given where her hand was, I couldn't quite see how she could move forward onto Sokka, but then that probably due to my lack of imagination rather than the way it was written. I guess Azula had freed her hand by the time she was digging her fingernails into Sokka's side, but since it's never mentioned again, I couldn't really tell for sure. ;)

I liked the way that Azula set out to be cruel, to tease and abuse her victim, before just leaving and never thinking of him again, and yet her plan slowly unravels as she looses herself in enjoying what Sokka has to offer. The connection that exists between them, by the time that they've both been sated, is very well described, with Azula knowing that she would never use her firebending on him, and that Sokka wouldn't use his free arm to strangle her. ^_^

As for the ending, well that kinda weakened this brilliant story a bit for me, since I wasn't completely sure if everything had happened as described, or whether it was all some sort of disturbed fantasy. Still it was insanely hot, and I very much enjoyed reading it, so thanks for writing yet another great fic. =)
person a
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad i would like to request a Mai/Katara oneshot if that doesnt bother you.
person get buck
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that was an interesting idea.
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool dude. IT's good to see your work again, Azula and Sokka huh? Please tell your anolomyous friend thank you very much!!! Hey if you need an idea for another story I got one. Sokka, and Toph are stuck with an injured Azula alone after she's betrayed by the return of Admiral Zhao from the Spirit World. Mai and Ty Lee are stuck in the spirit world with Aang and Katara dealing with two fueding brother spirits (Fire and Cold). Zhao wants to unleash a fearsome power (The Gorgon's Eye) against the Fire Lord for his own atempt to the throne. So Sokka, Azula, and Toph are forced to work together or the world may be petrified forever! (PLus insert some fun in. You know Sokka with two royal girls)It's just an idea but I thought it sounded good and you would at least listen to it. Any who thanks for a great story and it's good to see you around again keep up the great work and have a happy holidays. Merry Christmas!!!