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for Toph Always Tops

by AloofandAndrogynous

person papapapuffy
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So very hot.... *turns on the fan* Needs a epilog ;D
Katara needs to submit some more and do some new positions x]
person Jhondie
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see you finally updated. So they had vibrators back then, eh? ;)
person Jhondie
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Also, to the Anon idiot up there bitching at you... this isn't a rape story. Neither is the Moon one. Get your head checked.
person Maritova
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really fun stuff. I envy your ability to write fun dialogue; the banter between Toph and Katara is a joy to read and really shows them having an enjoyable time with each other, which is far more entertaining to me than the mere angst/drama in a lot of stories. Keep up the good work!
person chaos monger
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story, btw why not write a story based off this ATLA comic

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pic-35461.html
person kubot
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I do love all of your stories! I do hope there is more please!
person Jhondie
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I can't help but chortle at little Toph "seeing" things throughout the Beifong manor...
person wein6
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love toph.
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome. love the story. you really seem to capture the characters personalities. the plot is good and the way the story is written is very good. it's almost as though i'm watching it. looking forward to what happens next.
person avatargirl92
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad it turned out so well. :D