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May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this is hot love the way you can paint pictures I want more!!
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this sooo mucho they make a beautiful couple pleaseee put up more chapters i know i discovered this late but i love it so much i hope theres still more
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December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really hot. you should write more chapters.
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September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far. I hope you post Chapter 4 soon. Which girl will do Suki first?
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far!
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When you mentioned Suki in chapter two (with Toph teasing Katara about Suki) I was hoping you'd add her in. I'm SO glad you did!
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh. "We could even get Suki in on it, if you're feeling adventurous."
Well, not bad. I really like Katoph among other yuri pairings...
"SEVEN!?! SHE WAS SEVEN?!?"-Wolf
"Seven and a half."-Me
"SO!? THAT DOESN'T CHANGE ANYTHING!"-Wolf
"Hey, it is only a story. It ain't like I am gonna put that in your story."-Me
"IT IS BAD ENOUGH I KNOW ABOUT IT THOUGH!"-Wolf
Well, not bad. I really like Katoph among other yuri pairings...
"SEVEN!?! SHE WAS SEVEN?!?"-Wolf
"Seven and a half."-Me
"SO!? THAT DOESN'T CHANGE ANYTHING!"-Wolf
"Hey, it is only a story. It ain't like I am gonna put that in your story."-Me
"IT IS BAD ENOUGH I KNOW ABOUT IT THOUGH!"-Wolf
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was very good!!! on a side note, i'm pretty sure this is okay on ff.net. i've read some of your other stuff, too. i'm pretty sure all of it is okay for ff.net. i've certainly read and posted things along the same lines. anyway, back to this: i really love your writing and this story was rad!!
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I forgot half the jokes we slipped in there. :D
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ow, that hurt from how awesome that was