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by battleaxe

schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a clever tiein right there.
person flyer23
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In a odd way it makes sense.That explain Hana come to be and her powers.
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist on how Hana came to be. I must admit I like what you did in this story the scenes were well written and very descriptive. I really enjoyed this one.
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jaw drops......Hana.....that makes sense....Please more of this story cause I hope your not done with it!
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I always suspected a Ron Yori Hana connection. Love the story!
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice my friend if this isn't the end I am really looking forward to what you've go planned next.
person Badboy2
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice love the story very erotic. Keep going please.
person Badboy2
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot! Hot! Hot! More please!!!
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DANG IT!!! YOUR TOO GOOD!!!! NOW I'M ON SANTA'S NAUGHTY LIST BECAUSE OF THIS STORY!!!!! (But seriously I love this story your so detailed and vibrent to your work. Keep up the great work.
person RAW19
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
........I trust there's going to be more. For this story is far too good to end here. It was innocent, yet sensual. It was in character, yet so far above the show. It was great and i loved it. I avidly hope for more.