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for The Awkward Car Sex Fic

by ananon

schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I, *giggle*, I, that, it...IT WAS AWESOME! Why have you not written more? That was brilliant! Thank you for writing such a romantic and sexy story! It always leaves me in a good mood when I find a good fanfic after so long of sifting through mediocre fluff!
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this paring! Good story by the way ^.^
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The has got to be one of the best oneshots I have ever read! Maybe even the best! It was simply amazing. From start to finish. They were both so in character (and so was Wyatt) that it seemed canon. I could actually see this happening. I love that you kept Jude unexperienced, but so willing to learn. One of my favorite parts had to be when Jonesy was thinking about Jude masturbating and was like 'hold on, does Jude know about that?'. That was priceless. And the sex! Oh, god, I can't praise you enough!!! Thank you, thank you for writing such a brilliant fic!
person SaiChan
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD!!!! That was AWESOME!!! One of the single best fanfics I've ever read in my entire life!! By far the best one shot!! That was amazing!! The details were spot on and the flow was impressivey professional! Your description of their emotions changing and the confusion of beginning a relationship were delicious on their own, not to mention the overwhemlingly powerful foreplay and actual sex. That was everything any fan could ever ask for in a Jonesy/Jude M-rated fic! You deserve more praise then I think I could ever possibly give you! Not just the sex, no! Your writing style is addictive and flows wonderfully from one point to the next. Everything seemed so believable and everyone was in character. The moments when they got into the fight and Wyatt calling and Jonesy answering the phone to torture Jude were all in context with the show. There are so many things to compliment and nothing to say in the negative. All I can really say is that you are an amazing writer, this fic is insanely impressive, and I will be telling everyone in the world to read it, regardles of whether they watch 6teen. This fic can stand on its own, it was so well done. Regardless of fandom.
You should have a million reviews. I think you would if it were posted on fanfiction. You shoudl consider it. Only, you couldn't call is The Awkward Car Sex Fic, cause ff has to have clean titles. You should call it Awkward and post it there. If only because you deserve more praise and awknowledgement then I believe AFF can provide for this genre.
Either way, this was delicious and made my day. I can only thank you so much for posting it. It is AWESOME.
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
duuuuuude, best car sex EVER! I liiiiked it. it was good, like really good. totally good. for sure.
person Sateru99
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this Fic! x3 Sexy, and you've captured the essense of what Jonesy and Jude are like. ^_^ I've always thought of them as a perfect couple, and you've helped prove it! Thank you, and keep on the good job! For the sake of all that is Yaoi, continue!
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my... Am I drooling? Jude in a skirt!? That would be a perfect sequel! I loved your fic! I hope you find time and inspiration! -Shayne
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope sex in a skirt is next on the menu, THAT WAS HOT!!
It had just the right amount of relationship and sex to make it really, really good!

Please dont leave this here Anon,
You are kinda desperstly wanted (skirtsexskirtsexskirtsexsubliminalmessaging....)
person GellyBelly
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ummm... Even though it was awkward...
IT STILL MADE ME FEEL HOT!!
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There seams to be only one way to describe your fic. OH GOD! OH GOD! YES YES YESSSS!!!