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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
With only minimal typos this story enthralls the reader. The misfortune lies in having already read the two "Ripper" stories, then finding this unfinished prequel. We see Bart's desire unfolding and his discovery of his mother's past before she married Homer. How this confuses Bart and shapes his future actions, however unjustifiable they may be. Lisa is awakening to puberty and her own desires here. Marge should definitely invest in Caller ID and assertiveness training classes. But instead she allows herself to be drawn into the seamy underworld she earlier abandoned. Would certainly like this story to continue. I would add to it myself if I believed I could do it justice.
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is it Moe? Maybe....
More chapters to come. I'm releasing the stories about Marge, Lisa and Bart as separate chapters now. The next will be in a day or two.
More chapters to come. I'm releasing the stories about Marge, Lisa and Bart as separate chapters now. The next will be in a day or two.
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That obscene phone caller ... is that Moe?!
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story dude!
I can't find your story Bart the Ripper though, can you put it back up so I can see the one this is a prequel too?
I can't find your story Bart the Ripper though, can you put it back up so I can see the one this is a prequel too?
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story this is a prequel to is located at this address...http://cartoon.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600040729
I didn't write it, JayDee did.
I didn't write it, JayDee did.