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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was intense. You have to make more chapters!
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yo dude love what ya did with the concept and the whole her geting into it despite ur descriptions of how she felt and the way u ended it was sweet keep writing hope to see more chapters
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool story good grammar no spelling errors i could see great job so far look forward to the next chap
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, I don't like how it was practicly rape, and would have been had gwen not relented. however, I must say, AIN'T NOTHIN' HOT LIKE ALIEN SEX! In conclusion I hope to see more chapters soon. P.S. Keep in mind he won't be able to use heatblast, also if max gets mad when he finds out. have ben be doing gwen as excelerate in that chapter that way the chapter name can be "the fast and the furious". ;)