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Wow great stories, keep up the great work. I'm trying to comment as much as i can, it so cool to see a review. :) Be well and again the keep up the great work.

Sabbs (AFF author)

Whoa! This is some absolutely stunning stuff! The sex scenes are smoking hot, yet the characters remain believable and true to the show, and the storylines are amazing! I'm rather looking forward to seeing how you handle Diamondhead, and I have no idea how you're gonna make Stinkfly work, but I'm sure looking forward to finding out! ^_^

would this count as fish sex or eel sex, either way, I've seen women do them both. nice new chapter

Another awesome chapter. Cant wait for the rest of the aliens to come out. You should try graymatter next lol

great story i like how you are using different reasons for ben and gwen to have sex. i also like how each alien has a different waykink for instance upgrade has no dick so ben combining with a dildo to have sex is good, or ghoastfreak having a tenticle dick is a good way (i think that he should of had more though) and these are great ways of making it interesting.

i like how gwen is going to fuck the first 10 aliens but is she going to fuck the others that ben gets by the end of the series:
WILDVINE
CANNONBOLT
BENWOLF (the wolf that had the abbility to fire sonic blasts)
BENMUMMY (the mummy form the ghoastfreak arc)
BENVICKTOR (the frankenstien type monstor)
DITTO
UPCHUCK

after you finish this set are you going to do alien force?
if so it will be the best that is out there for ben10 alien force

Ja Ne

I must say. It has been many years since a story captivated me like yours has. I enjoyed it so much, that I stayed up all night to read them. Your style is well developed and it has an incredible flow of events, that is appealing sexually, but keeps the romance alive. I have enjoyed the entire story, but I simply loved the cave encounter with heatblast. The romance, the forbidden love, the humor. I just wanted to tell you how much I loved your story, and let you know how much I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Great stuff as always. How the story moves and flows is amazing. I was wondering something though. We know Gwen has agreed to do it with all ten of his alien heroes but what about the extras he became later in the series like ditto and Ben wolf? Will they get any love?

Nicely done, keep up the great writing. :)

sweet, another chapter.
again, I'm really enjoying the characterization.
You write both ben and gwen well.

Man, what can I say? I really love how your writing these. The way you actually give them story before you get to the sex scenes is great! I absolutely love how your incorporating the alien sex into this, although it is about that.. but still. On top of that, you are also showing romance between the two, not just some hot, mad, unbridled passion... your keeping to how they actually act in the show. Along with that, you write the sex scenes... dare I say perfectly? Regardless of the qualifier, they are certainly amazing and very hot. It makes this just perfect and is absolutely what im looking for in a ben 10 read. Please dont stop with these, keep em up! I thoroughly enjoy em and im sure every one else does as well. Incredibly well done! Keep em up! Looking forward to the next!