rate_review Reviews

I just finished reading your fic, it's absolutly incredible, really hot, and at times very romantic. I really cant wait to see what alien you choose for the 10th encounter, How cannon-bolt will work is beyond me, but i think wild-vine, with all those tentacles will be kinda kinky, especially since Gwen dosnt seem to have a problem with anal is seems! ^_^

A few minor spelling errors, nothing major, something like the occasional 'he' instead of 'she' but nothing beyond that.

But one thing i had trouble with was after the encounter with four-arms, i dont quite understand why Gwen was so upset, and it wasnt really expanded upon in the next chapter.

In closing, 10/10 across the board, and i cant wait to see what comes next.

shame this stopped updating :( one of the best stories ever

can't rate more than 5 out of 5 this story deserves at least a 20 out of 5

I keep hoping that each time I check this site there will be a new chapter. Certainly one of the best stories on the site.

nice i like the story imy fav parring is bwen even when you add plot like on reg ff.net

will gwen ever have sex with him as him?

I like this! XD Xd

I really really really like this!

Wildmutt was my fav!

Very good story. I really like. Say, has Ben ever actually done Gwen as a human? Also, just wondering, will you do a wildvine chapter? Anyway, good story.

Great stuff with Diamondhead and Stinkfly! You really made those work! And Ditto too! That was a little unexpected, but quite a fun ride! Of course you've still got XLR8 and Graymatter to go out of the original 10, plus there's also Cannonbolt, Upchuck and Wildvine, not to mention Benmummy, Benwolf and Benvictor if you wanna do those. And if you really wanna get freaky you could always try Eyeguy and Waybig from the movie Ben 10: Secret of the Omnitrix, although how Gwen could ever possibly handle Waybig, or how they'd be able to keep that a secret, is totally beyond me! XD

I loved the Ditto chapter. Great stuff. I agree with slurp Gwen should ask for a repeat performance from one of the ones you've already done.

OMG, TWELVE Ditto? But considering the alien's shared mind link, it would help to have at least as many non-active ditto as active ones. Great chapter, and I'm definitely curious to see how or if you're going to be able to do Cannonbolt...I mean, he probably has the biggest, thickest penis of all of Ben's aliens. But whomever you decide to do next I'm sure it'll be a wonderful addition to this story.