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I can't wait to see what Xlr8 and Gray matter will do

And how about alien X that would be awesome And Cannonbolt too and too get some monster's in it to Wildvine too and Benvicktor
Benmummy and Benvicktor too

I love it so far and All but why no anel he should totality bang her in the ass it's about time he did I mean fourarms had two dicks and they didn't try come on please do it please

And maybe he can use feedback too be the one to do it in her ass

When and if you do a chapter with XLR8 you gonna have Ben have sex with Gwen while on the run?

Okay, I'm very late in replying since I listened to this months ago. (It's sub-basic text-to-speech software so I can listen while exercising, but with the right formatting before conversion it does more than good enough for me.)

First, it was brilliant to ease into the sexual relationships (even if "ease" wasn't much of it) by using the instinct-driven Wildmutt to get things started. Then it started to get more fun as Gwen started using him, only for him to understand and try to get more out of it. Very natural that he'd tease her and go a bit too far, plus the times where he was kind of a jerk (realizing it or not) and hurting her feelings. The scene in New Orleans where she has to get herself to the fountain and clean up by herself had me feeling very bad for her, and I think that once she suggest to Ben (as Four-Arms IIRC) that he could have done a few things to help her out then he felt guilty too. All in all I saw a good natural kid-like relationship, with the experimenting and the sexual play overlapping sometimes, plus Ben's ever-increasing notice of his own human attraction towards his lovely (and very sexually receptive) cousin.

I have to admit a little frustration that Ben and Gwen never made love/had sex in human form, but then again maybe to them that would have been much weirder than having alien sex so often. Despite the missteps Ben did do some good for her and seemed to have genuine affection for more than simply as a lover or a family member, but with kids you can't know if that period of experimentation is a phase that they'll secretly laugh about decades later. One other thing I'll give him credit for is trying out stuff on himself as Ditto, perhaps for a better understanding of what Gwen feels while also sating some of his own curiosity that scared him too.

Meanwhile, though quite horny at times and a tease, Gwen was still quite a lady in many ways. And throughout also very loving and caring for her cousin as well. And quite a good instigator when she was in the mood. ;)

Very lovely work. I know it's been a few years and you may not even get notification of this review, but wherever you landed I hope that you're still writing – erotic or not, but whatever makes you happy. Best wishes.

I really enjoyed the plot and especially enjoyed the sex scenes with all the aliens. i enjoy the developing relationship between ben and gwen. i really do hope you are going to write more becuase i would like to read chapters for all of ben's aliens, all the way up to ben 10 omniverse.

any plans to continue this story?

Vary enjoyable, read them all and would love to see some more! :)

This is much too good to end now. What of the two finally getting around to admitting their love (and human sex)?