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Yes, a new chapter! *dances* I have this fav'd and have been checking since my review to see an update. Jubilations. I actually like the way you phrase, I think it sounds pretty and almost poetic. Poor Zuko, no peace even at night.

~*KA*~

This is really well-done, I like it a lot. I also like that you said you have most of the chapters written in advance, which means no long waits between chapters. =)

The only real criticism I have to offer is that sometimes the wording of certain sentences or dialogue is awkward or slightly odd. Is English your first language?

Other than that, yeah, this story is A+ and I hope you continue it! =)

I did this in one sitting, and I'm sorry I was lazy and didn't review each chapter. I love what you're doing and how you're doing it. I cannot wait for the next chapter and see how this story ends. I hope you fit Zuko's redemption with Katara in; "Southern Raiders" was one of the best episodes of the series.

~*KA*~

Ha, Aang is jealous of Toph. Just one thing I wanted to say about Toph too: she has pale green eyes, not blue (that just might be my own opinion though, so don't worry too much about it)

well what do u expect? It just keeps getting better as it gos. And it hasnt even reached any lemoney goodness yet :P And Im a bit of an angst whore lol, so Im up for the dark before the storm. U keep updating and Ill keep reading! ^.^

Fantastic fantastic fantastic!!!!!!! O come now Zuko u know y u want to pull Aang closer >:) lol. Ok Im officially in love with this story. I cant wait to c more updates. This whole story is flowing so well, and no one is acting OOC. Ur doing an amazing job with that part. Im just waiting to see when katura snaps and strikes lol, i bet it will be funny. Ok again update soon pretty please :D !!!

I'm really enjoying this story so far, and I encourage you to write more!!

I really like this story it is very good! Update soon! ^_^

Hello, I read your story and I would like to say a number of things. First, I absolutely love this friendship between Toph and Suko, I cannot wait to see how it plays out between him and the rest of the team: who's going to be nicer/meaner and so on. Your story also has the very good grammer and spelling, its a welcome change from the many of the stories here. The fact that your has a good plot helps, can't wait to see wht comes next. I love the ZukoAang part, its going to be fun tosee how you acually make them get together, and whether everyone accepts them. Nice work, keep writing! (:

aw that was too cute! I love Zuko and Aang pairings, hope to see more soon! ^_^

Ohhh, I love this already! I'm always looking for more stories in the Avatar section, since there aren't that many. Specially recently updated ones. And my fave pairings are Zuko/Aang and Sokka/Aang . Oh, I am checking out your freewebs right now, and I see that you have so many of the chapters up for this on FF.net! Eeeek! Must totally check them out, but I will still be faithful here. I usually re-read stories I like, complete and incomplete, more than once. Can't wait for more!