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by DarthAnimus

schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally an update. But it was worth waiting for. I hope another one is to come soon please!
person RyuaAlba
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, I just gulped that entire story down, and it is now an hour and a half past my bedtime. I really enjoy your take on the story. It's a quite believable version of events too.
person Elfsong
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I like the idea of Aang being the more dominant partner in the relationship. Also, Jeong Jeong always struck me as being almost afraid of his bending. I thought he was very much in character in that last chapter. So who will Sokka end up with? Suki? Toph? Jun? Will he try to repopulate the whole Southern Water Tribe himself by getting with all three? Thanks for sharing this. I look forward to the next chapter. BTW, the Toph/Zuko relationship is great. She almost seems like an older sister to him at times.
person Elfsong
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. Jeong Jeong has sort of redeemed himself. I'd like to see Aang and Toph's take on Zuko's new white fire. That was neat. Thanks for sharing this!
schedule August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like how Aang is trying to make a romantic date with Zuko to give him a kiss that is too cute. Hope to see an update soon please!
person Pumpkin Head Jones
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm in love with this story. There's a blunt simplicity to your writing style thats just poetic! Can't wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOODNESS. That was so, so sweet/sad, I almost cried. And the end, finding out what Zuko said, ohhhhh man.
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kewl i cant imagine all the lives zuko and katara could save with the healing powers they got. hope to see anther update soon please keep them acomin!
person Peanut
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
.....o3o.........why must you leave me with a cliffhanger.....i neeeeed to know what happens next now. just can't get me all interested then leave me at a cliffhanger.
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great update hope to see what happens next soon