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Loved the story! Very unique and original...hope you write a nrw Zuko/Katara fic....anyhow, keep up the good work!=)

How does this not have more than five reviews? I was expecting somewhere within the realm of thirty-five, or something. I'll just have to make do when the one I'm adding then.

This story is amazing. I've got nothing but good things to say about it. The progression of the relationships is slow and just right, though the feelings are clear and believable. Everyone's character was in tact, and I have to say, my favorite Sokka line EVER is now, " ...Why is it whenever I come back -some-body has a child?" And, of course, your Zuko I could just take right home with me. Feisty and adorable, I love it.

Well done.

A very nice, very sweet finale, sir. But, I think you missed a step, cause there was now chapter featuring the final showdown with Azula and her minions. Did you forget to post that? Well, just thought I'd point that out. Laters.

Well I've read all you currently have, and it's a very engaging story, I look forward to the final smackdown with Azula. Until then. Laters.

OH MAN YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS :O
I decided to read the whole thing before commenting and best decision ever much!? XD
I love the fic, it's really awesome and YAY FOR ZUTARA AND TAANG \XD/

Continue soon ne!!

Omg i cant believe you only have one other review! This story is so freaking awesome, it should have thousands of reviews. You ROCK!

On a more serious note, I believe you could improve your writing by having the chapters a bit longer. For example, you could have two chapters to each page. I know that it gets really annoying to me having to download another page every 3 minutes.

Keep up the superb work, I will be watching this space!

This is freaking amazing. By far the best fanfic that I've read. You kept the character personalities and made it seem like a perfect extension of the canon plot.

You are awesome, so keep up the great work!