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I must say this is one of the best Avatar stories I've ever read, let alone adult avatar stories. The characters are how I would believe they would react to the situations and you do a great job painting a picture for the reader. Keep up the good work, and hope to see a new chapter soon.

Excellent story. It's a true crme that this fic doesn't have more reviews.

Your 'visuals' are stunning, the characterization is on-spot and plot (it actually exists!) is awesome. A greedy part of me would love to see a girl or more added (Katara/Toph/whpever), but regardless I have every intention of reading what will clearly be a great story. Hope to see more soon!

I don't normally review stories.

But this one is special.

This is the only story I have read on AFF where I think Azula's character is protrayed well.
It is certainly the only flemslash story featuring Azula where her character is protrayed well and sympathetically
that I have read.

Please continue it.
I can't wait to see if Ty-Lee can seduce Azula, or what happened to Mai for that matter.

I just want to say that this fic is fantastic in every way, and I eagerly look forward to an update :D

Not sure why no one's reviewed this, so I thought I should throw you a bone: You've earned it. I've never seen an adult story and psychology cooperate and compliment each other so well. This is a delicious piece, from the rich textures of your flawless description of each Ozai's Angel's status, physically, emotionally, and mentally and how the Dai Li overcome those obstacles to the tense and arousing buildup of the sexual aspect of the story. Well, I wouldn't say it's a full-fledged story, as I'm unsure of where this may be going, but this is one intriguing piece that blurs the line between evocative writing/storytelling and delicious smut.

Put simply, this piece rocks and I hope you update soon.

P.S. Goddamn, Ty Lee looks sexy in that outfit you described in such rich detail. The image is stuck in my head now.

When this story disappeared a while back I was quite sad, since it's a personal favorite on the website. But when I saw it was back up, I was very happy.

Then I saw the new chapter, and read it.

And now I am ecstatic.

Things are developing brilliantly and I am finding myself eagerly anticipating how you'll direct things from here. I cannot wait to see the final products of Mai, Ty Lee and Azula.

You get extra points for focusing on gagging Azula. Made my day, that did. I'm a sucker for girls in bondage, so you've hit my tastes spot on. I don't want to come off as one of those pompous reviewers who demand things in the stories they read, but I would like to say I look forward to whatever binds and gags you put on the fire nation girls from here on in!

Looking forward to the next chapter!