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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this. Please, seriously. Maybe just one more chapter. You've done an excellent job crafting the story so far- it'd be a flat out shame to have it remain incomplete on the cusp of finality.
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Possibly the most dark and twisited fanfiction I have ever read...o.o
This just takes the cake. 10/10
Great stuff and wonderfully fleshed out world. This is ...a masterpiece really. I wish I could read some of your other work.
A great thriller. Always check on this whenever I get the chance, really good stuff.
Hope you find the time and inspiration to write more of this.
This just takes the cake. 10/10
Great stuff and wonderfully fleshed out world. This is ...a masterpiece really. I wish I could read some of your other work.
A great thriller. Always check on this whenever I get the chance, really good stuff.
Hope you find the time and inspiration to write more of this.
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Right, hello there. I couldn't help but finally join the site after seeing this piece of work. It's pretty incredible. Characterization's believable, pace is very nice; just an overall very good story. I just wanted to say that I look forward to the rest (or last, if that's what the next chapter is) of this work, and I do hope it comes very soon. Later!
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kinky and delicious, write more.
Preferably with more hot girlsex and less darkness ¬___¬
Preferably with more hot girlsex and less darkness ¬___¬
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You certainly do know when to end it, leaving the audience wanting more.
Here's hoping we won't have to wait to long for the next chapter.
Here's hoping we won't have to wait to long for the next chapter.
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very powerful chapter. Keep up the great work!
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When you go through smut works on the web, there is usually a lot of nice PWP, interesting ideas, good charachter description, plots that make your skin crawl... But once in a while there comes a special fanfic that has everything at it's top level, stands out and makes you glue yourself to the screen, biting your lips, as your heart starts pumping faster. Lake Laogai - is that kind of fic, that should be called a classic!
Thank you for creating this amazing piece! I hope you will continue writing... this story keeps buzzing in my mind.
Thank you for creating this amazing piece! I hope you will continue writing... this story keeps buzzing in my mind.
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
my father once told me that cursing makes you sound stupid,
that being said, holy shit this is amazing. you...i... I can't even come up with coherent review comments.
if i could i'd buy you a beer or something, please update soon
that being said, holy shit this is amazing. you...i... I can't even come up with coherent review comments.
if i could i'd buy you a beer or something, please update soon
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow... the psychology in here is amazing... brilliant writing and very warped, exactly why i love this story :) Please continue this, i want to know whats in store for Azula.
Update soon...
xx
Update soon...
xx
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just... wow. I´m trying to come up with a sutible way to express my awe at your talent as a writer in general, and erotica writer specificly. But i just can´t find the words.
*Bows humbly*
*Bows humbly*