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June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story and an excellent current chapter.
I especially like your take on toph and her interactions with sokka are flat out hilarious.
Hope to see more of the story soon.
Jimmy.
I especially like your take on toph and her interactions with sokka are flat out hilarious.
Hope to see more of the story soon.
Jimmy.
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June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome series, please write more. And as a personal request, if you can some how add yue that would be awesome. Also a lemon with ty lee, suki and toph would be epic. I love how sokka got back his sword. And how he came up with the idea of searching the prison. And nice name for the prison by the way. The cactus, is awesome. The whole story is awesome. By the way, sokka fan. And toph fan too. I liked how toph beet lo and how she can now see in the desert. She met kyoshi and I was flat out happy. The brillance of this story is beyond me. Thank you for writing it and please continue.
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June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. The story is engaging and keeps me interested. There are some portions I find do not fit with the Avatar canon but thankfully they do not go so far as to become a serious occurrence. Explanations of each fight are easy to understand and do not over elaborate every single move a character makes. Sex scenes are top notch but may need some elaboration on the position of each character.
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June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the update. but could you add a love seen for Aang and Katrra (bad spelling)
Hope to hear from you soon
Hope to hear from you soon
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July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is a very well written story. although in the sex scene the words you used were rather... vulgar for lack of a better word. other than that very good. was that a bleach reference i caught at the beginning? "Gooood morning Ichigo?"
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January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey Jayrich, that was an AWESOME chapter and quite the cliff hanger there. (^_^) I am looking VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY forward to the next chapter. (^_^) (^_^)
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful just wonderful you have to writ more i love this fic and i must say a nice azula is creepy but funny
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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jayrich that was AWESOME and i think the most HILARIOUS paragraph i have read in your stories yet. (^_^) i look UNBELIEVABLY forward to reading the next chapter. (^_^)
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing story!
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jayrich, this is certainly one of the MOST INTERESTING, FUNNIEST, and HOTTEST stories i have EVER READ, and i am looking VERY VERY VERY forward to the next chapter. (^_^)