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Like your drabbles. Can I make a suggestion?
Such a big deal was made that Trent was unreliable because he couldn't meet a deadline. (For a school project that IRL, would only be given to college level computer art/animation majors, not high school students.) No one ever seems to point out that Tom was unreliable because he couldn't be counted on not to kiss his girlfriend's best friend. What would happen if while Daria and Tom were dating, Tom kissed Quinn? "One Jay At A Time" would be a good ep to set it in.

Fantastic stories!!! :) There aren't enough Daria/Trent fics out there, I was very happy to find yours :)

I hope you will update again soon :)

Nice addition even though you can't work smut into every chapter it's nothing to be embarassed about you just can't find a good segway to it. I'm sure it'll come to you my suggestion watch some hentai they have a pretty good track record of going from normal conversation to the slap and tickle.

I'm loving this fic, but YOU have to finish it. Its sad that there aren't many Daria fics out there especially Daria+Trent paring. Please update!

Pretty cool chapter I think Sherman needed his face beat in by somebody. As far as the whole age thing with the smut you gotta think it's only stories, most of the people that read these are into anime (Japanese don't really have age issues), and she is only a cartoon character so not to much of ethical stretch. Just as long as you don't go for the whole rape thing by some old guy, consentual sex is all good.

I must say I was a bit confused especially with the jumping around in the story that you did. I mean you went from 510 with Daria and Trent having a tickle fight on his bed to a flash back of her first meeting Trent to a flash forward of Trent obviously forgetting that she was eighteen. Are the onshots supposed to be seperate or lead into one another? I do still enjoy them though would like to see how that cat one goes.

I love all your fanfics, period. I'm sorry this one was hard for you to write but it seems like with this series your sticking to the general storyline with all the hidden goodies that were never in the real show. I loved this episode as much as I love when you just ignore the general storyline and have Daria and Trent getting together. I know alot of people thought Tom was better for her but to me he was just a bore and an arrogant pain-in-the-ass. I thank you kindly for updating--because as I said I love your writing. Whether you decide to continue with this series or start with another I have to say I love Daric--your character. I even loved it when he was with Daria, thought I do prefer him as Trent's more intellectual (compared to to the less verbose Jessie, whom I still adore, as well).

Maybe the band could take a winter roadtrip--to a three-day concert or contest--and Janie and (the now 18) Daria could go. Lots of potential in that, or not. I'm just making suggestions like ya' asked, although maybe you would prefer a different kind.

All blathering aside,
I love ya' for writing Daria/Trent fanfic,
and I always will.


With regards
and wishes for inspiration sent virtually your way,

Lady Delilah

Yay updates, unfortunately for me, my laptop has officially died and will not be writing on my brothers or Fathers computers that's for sure. This wouldn't be in sequence but what about the episode pierce me? Would she still go ahead and become pierced or not? More please.

I love the flow of this story. It feels like I'm reading something that really took place. I also like the way you had Trent wanting to get away from Brittany--his face vault when he first saw her on the show bummed me out big time. The way you wrote it makes it seem more like he was just surprised to see Jane with a cheerleader and no Daria in sight.

I hope Daria either turns eighteen soon or is already eighteen, I can't remember if the show ever had her birthday mentioned or when it was. I'm one of those unlucky people who didn't get cable until Daria was (censored) on Noggin and MTV had cancelled its runs of the show and so I know I missed out on some cool stuff. Egads, I do digress, don't I? I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story, well, I love all your stories but I'm sure you already know that.

P.S. I especially like the way he declined to do the project because he just wasn't feeling it. I also like the subtle moves he's putting on her, they're gentlemanly, they show his affection towards her even if he isn't ready to make a move on her *yet*.

I look forward to reading additional chapters of this story.



May the muse always be with you,
all the best,

Lady Delilah

God if I could have my way I would want them all re-written, when it comes to Trent and Daria I can't resist! Tom for me was so boring and uninteresting I kept wondering when he would disappear. More please !!!!
And the best episode to redo would be My Night at Daria's. (hint,hint.)
I will be looking out for more. Oh and by the way you are my first review ever on AFF, which is unusual for me, since I never review but I couldn't resist this since it wasn't a jump straight into bed fanfiction.