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I miss you buddy I still cant believe you are gone, and at such a young age, I doubt there will be another writer like you. R.I.P Hope they have fanfiction in heaven.

Not bad,

Just hate these OC Daric and Angel. Sorry I know they are your babies but really to me who has just watched the entire series in three days. Daric and Angel are pretty annoying.

any more smutty daria.trent on the horizon?
i read every single one and loved em all!

You are redundant. You use the same plots, drama, words in each one of these. I don't know how many times you had Daria and Trent talk/think about how that project screwed everything up, but it's a lot. And if they were real, that project, a minuscule school project, wouldn't and shouldn't be a bases of why they should or shouldn't get together. Sure Daria was disappointed, but that doesn't mean that doesn't mean she'll say no to Trent if he asked her out. It's a good bit for small drama between them, but should really only be mentioned once or twice in their whole relationship. I really like your writing, I've read all your fics, but you need to be more creative. The werecat bit was good, but then you used it a lot and it got stale. I'm not saying that you should have a different plot line everytime, but you do use a lot of the same things.... back pains because big boobs and too small stature to handle them, Trent being good at back massages so he can cure her back pains, her being practically addicted to pain medicine because of said back pains (by the way, if she were using pain medicine as much as you inclined, she would eventually become immune to them, also why isn't she seeing a chiropractor about her back pains.... some things just don't make sense), Your OC's come back to town the same way and left it because the same reason (<--most of the time) and play the same instruments and have no real depth, you always kick Nick out of the band when your OC's come to town or just joins the band, Max and Nick don't fight as much as you say but they always do in your fics, you make Daria out to be a total badass but she's not she's sarcastic, the Barksdale libido or legs or whatever to do with them and more. Also you should get a beta, I noticed some spelling and grammar errors and they could also be used to get ideas or finding out if an idea you have is good and help you expand on it. As I said, I like your writings, but please be more creative, and if you need ideas ask your readers for some. We can come up with something we would like to her with your style of writing. Oh, and I like your choice in music, I love Metallica and Megadeth!

I approve, I like the way you had Daria reevaluate the story because of the name of the guy she invented. I'm glad that you took you time with my idea. I'll e-mail you if I get another idea.

Love the new chapter especially with Daria using her curse as a costume. My Email is the same as my other review about "Quinn the brain", I wasn't signed in when I made that review.

Love the new chapter, epically the end. Here is an idea for ep. 213 “Write where it Hurts”. In the story that Daria writes instead of a guy that she created have her end up with Trent, but make it to where the Spiral made it big. Thus making her need to show that she can be just who she is and that she doesn’t have to change at all, or something like that. It’s almost 2 in the morning where I am, so my brain is working at 35% capacity. Hope I gave you more of less the right idea, if not e-mail me.

dude I love your writing on Daria and on everything else I've read of yours. word girl was great.
the blood hound gang song u were talking about in 75 is fire water burn on one fierce beer coaster. much love keep it up and don't keep us waiting.

I normally don’t do this, I’m a lurker, but the idea won’t leave me alone. I have looked through your chapters and noticed that you haven’t done ep. #203 - Quinn the Brain yet; this came to mind. What if Trent for some reason or another (I’ll leave that for you to decide) comes to the door and asks to see Daria, while she is still dressed as Quinn. When he sees her dressed like that something happens inside his brain and starts to think of Daria as a woman instead of a high schooler. You see where this could go, really lone one shot.

hey. big fan of your stories, especially the DBZ ones. i was wondering who Daric and Angel are. I don't remember them being in the cartoon...so i'm kind of confused.