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for Duel Academy Chronicles

by Jarkota

schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter didn't see the God cards coming into play though, and really didn't see that Millenium ring coming out of retirement since I thought the spirit of the ring was destroyed, but it's your story and a nice twist. Also nice job with the KiGo scene did see it coming just hope Ron doesn't go by the wayside and he can actually be saved. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Tram
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome new chapter.Ron crushing Josh was fun and evil but funny.And Shego and Kim was hot.Now what will happen to Ron,Shego,Kim and the rest of they're friends next?And who will be next to card battle or sexual fun?
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story so far if you really do think about it I think Ron would have a bit more of a Joey Wheeler playing style to him. I mean you would think though that he would eventually pick something up before he jumped to these extremes. Well hopefully Kim will put two and two together and give Ron a reason to try harder. Also feel a little bad for Shego too I mean there are a lot of anime series out there where there is another female head over heels in love with the main character and her love goes unrequited. Well I hope that Ron does pick up the slack in the coming chapters and improve. Looking forward to new chapters.
person Tram
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sound like ron needs to grow up and stop been unfocuse.I like the whole thing.

Please do the next chapter soon.
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh kay you had me when you said Kim Possible and Yugioh which I love the both of alot of heart and I can't wait for the fun to begin with Shego and ROn. Although Rare Hunters? And if those cards are what I think they are... Oh Boy! Is Ron going to use an Elemental Hero Deck from the Manga? Cause that would be cool ROn vs Jaden with Elemental Heroes. Okay I admit I'm geeking out but I like the premise so please more soon.