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for A Small Problem

by englishwitch2003

person Aysha
schedule May 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very fun, thank you for a such an enjoyable story. If you write more I will be here to read it. :)
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it was good.
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what happens next
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww, that was cute! Ben, actually speachless and not knowing what to do! hehehehe What a bad girl we have!
person Bishonen
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great I almost never read het anymore but this was good.

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person Sabbs
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, I had the same thoughts of writing this but I doubt i'll do it now, yours is awesome. :)
person Ice13
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I'd love to see the fallout.
person skeeve
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, I hope you add more chapters to it. I've read several of your stories and have enjoyed them all.
Skeeve
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally someone figured a good Graymatter/Gwen story. That was very good and I hope you do another chapter with Ben and Gwen cause they still have to sleep together and Gwen is a sorceroress and they are usually very sexual hungry people. So please more and maybe an omnitrix malfunction again in it?
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, just wondering if this is a one shot or do you plan a sequel.