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for Total Bondage Island

by DrunkenSailor

schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, I love it.

It's so rare do find a well-written story like this.
It'd be great for you to go into the perspective of the other girls.
I'm especially glad that you included Izzy in it, for I was hoping to see some bondage involving her.

Overall, definately a five star so far from me.
person zwickerz
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oMG!11!!!11! g8t stry upd8 sun plx, thx... just kidding.

It's a lucky enough day when I find something on AFF that's dark enough to strike my fancy, the fact that it's perfectly readable, well-written story makes me want to try some lottery tickets. Chapter's detailing what happened to the other campers, as well as the viewpoints of the other girls in the group would really be aprreciated. Hope your muse strikes again soon!